Tuesday 31 May 2016

Narrative Writing (-:

Mary & Flippers


Swiftly a dolphin is swimming gracefully and peacefully, this dolphin's name is Flippers. Flippers slowed down from swimming, all of a sudden…  a humongous great white shark came speedily sobbing.


Flippers was very confused because, instead of the great white shark eating Flippers, the shark asked one QUESTION “Have you seen my daughter?, I lost her while he was in the park playing with his friends”,  “Oh so sorry I forgot to tell you my name, my name is Mary” said the shark very loudly while balling her eye’s.


Flippers said “ My name is Flippers”. There was a sudden pause until… they heard a scream, “Ahhhhhhhh!!!” Mary recognized that scream. The scream was her daughter’s scream.

Both Flippers and Mary swam in a hurry, to see that Mary’s daughter, Hannah was standing right in front of an Ice cream truck, they ran up to her and Hannah holding a ice cream cone said “ Mum I have a brain freeze” and Mary and Flippers laughed.