Tuesday, 31 May 2016

Narrative Writing (-:

Mary & Flippers


Swiftly a dolphin is swimming gracefully and peacefully, this dolphin's name is Flippers. Flippers slowed down from swimming, all of a sudden…  a humongous great white shark came speedily sobbing.


Flippers was very confused because, instead of the great white shark eating Flippers, the shark asked one QUESTION “Have you seen my daughter?, I lost her while he was in the park playing with his friends”,  “Oh so sorry I forgot to tell you my name, my name is Mary” said the shark very loudly while balling her eye’s.


Flippers said “ My name is Flippers”. There was a sudden pause until… they heard a scream, “Ahhhhhhhh!!!” Mary recognized that scream. The scream was her daughter’s scream.

Both Flippers and Mary swam in a hurry, to see that Mary’s daughter, Hannah was standing right in front of an Ice cream truck, they ran up to her and Hannah holding a ice cream cone said “ Mum I have a brain freeze” and Mary and Flippers laughed.     

3 comments:

  1. Hi Brooke,
    I really like your story for Narrative writing. It reminded me of the time me and my cousins went to the shop and our grandma thought we were lost. So keep up the good work!

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  2. LOL!! Thanks (-:

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